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westernredcedar ([personal profile] westernredcedar) wrote2007-06-29 08:38 pm

Drabble: Later

Title: Later
Author: Cedar
Word Count: 100
Rated: R
Characters: Severus and Remus
Warnings: slashy licking
A/N: A final drabble in the micro-series that started with Too Many Marks and was followed by You Promised. Thanks again [livejournal.com profile] blpaintchart for the encouragement!


Later, when Severus was drunk, naked, sated, draped luxuriously across the bed, Remus had his revenge.
His body worship of Severus had long been part of their routine, fingers, tongue running over his lanky frame, stopping at the sweet spots- that hollow behind his knee, the smooth skin below his hipbone, the curve of his elbow, the hollow of his throat. This would be only a small change in routine.
Pulling his aroused body up over his spent lover, Remus whispered, “You’ll look lovely in the neck scarf tomorrow,” and lowered his lips to Severus’s neck, leaving his own mark.


ETA: one more follow-up, a smutty ficlet

[identity profile] mnemosyne-1.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 04:21 am (UTC)(link)
Somehow I get the feeling that Severus will be wearing his marks proudly... *g*

Cute little series!

[identity profile] westernredcedar.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 06:26 am (UTC)(link)
I love it! Striding into the Dining Hall, head held high, daring someone to comment.

I'll call this the Hickey Series, volume 1. *eg*

Thanks so much!

[identity profile] nehalenia.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 05:32 am (UTC)(link)
Beautiful! What a great little series. That first line had me totally laughing. I would love for you to expand on this one, just so we get to see how Severus got drunk, naked, sated and luxuriously draped. :-D

[identity profile] westernredcedar.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 06:36 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks m'dear!
Hmm, now I want to see the missing scenes too, although that might be a series in itself, eh? Lots of steps to get there...drunk, then naked, then sated, then draped. Uh oh, ideas starting.
Ahh! I'm working like crazy on longer fics that I Will Complete by 7/21, but these darn boys keep making me write about them instead. Stop it boys! Geez.
Stay tuned... *g*

[identity profile] nehalenia.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 09:14 am (UTC)(link)
they do that, don't they? Don't worry about your longer fics. There will still be people to read them after 7/21. Might give it a week or 2 for the furor to die down tho. ;-)

[identity profile] westernredcedar.livejournal.com 2007-07-03 01:26 am (UTC)(link)
Okay I couldn't resist, because the boys just wanted to...
ficlet here
Thanks for the push.*g* Now back to my regularly scheduled writing...

[identity profile] chiralove.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 02:37 pm (UTC)(link)
mmm. Very hot!

[identity profile] westernredcedar.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Yummy boys.
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[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2007-06-30 03:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee, very nice revenge :D

[identity profile] westernredcedar.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 05:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for following this whole little series! Glad you liked them. *g*

[identity profile] celandineb.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 04:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Turnabout is fair play, no? *g* Nice!

[identity profile] westernredcedar.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 05:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Absolutely. I just like the image of Severus with a big, dark prominent hickey. What gossip that would be. *g*
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[identity profile] westernredcedar.livejournal.com 2007-07-01 07:47 pm (UTC)(link)
*mwah*
Happy to wave the wand and turn out some light smut for you! Thanks again for giving me the nudge to do it! ;-)
lore: (Lupin/Snape - Never Trust a Sleeping WW)

[personal profile] lore 2007-07-02 05:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Very sexy series in the descriptions and word choices. I think you'd have a flair for vampire fic. ;) *Hugs* Thank you for sharing!

love, lore

[identity profile] westernredcedar.livejournal.com 2007-07-02 07:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooo, wow, thanks so much! *flattered* Weird, what flairs one might have that are a surprise to discover, eh? *g* hmmm...vampires...
*hugs back*
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[identity profile] dizilla.livejournal.com 2007-07-03 07:05 am (UTC)(link)
*lol* *hee* NIce! *goes to read the smutty ficlet*

[identity profile] westernredcedar.livejournal.com 2007-07-03 08:05 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much! :-)

[identity profile] alisanne.livejournal.com 2007-07-03 10:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahahahah!
Excellent revenge. *g*

[identity profile] westernredcedar.livejournal.com 2007-07-04 04:09 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, Remus has his moments...:)
Thanks!