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Fic: What He Noticed First
13 Jun 2007 12:53 amTitle: What He Noticed First
Word Count: 1900
Characters: R/S with guest appearance by Sirius
Summary: Severus watches Remus every day, notices everything, needs him, is needed, finds his strength. Marauders era.
Warnings: angst, mild groping, self-indulgence, grammar means nothing to me
A/N: This was a small exercise to satisfy my desire to think through the Hogwart's part of the R/S story. It exploded on me, and I'm posting it to be done with it for now, as it has obsessed me. This is a series of nineteen 100 word drabbles, written in a kind of free verse stream of consciousness. This is also un'beta'd, as I figured the nonsensical grammar would only make a beta miserable. If you see glaring (seemingly unintentional) issues, let me know, I'll fix 'em.
( What He Noticed First )
Word Count: 1900
Characters: R/S with guest appearance by Sirius
Summary: Severus watches Remus every day, notices everything, needs him, is needed, finds his strength. Marauders era.
Warnings: angst, mild groping, self-indulgence, grammar means nothing to me
A/N: This was a small exercise to satisfy my desire to think through the Hogwart's part of the R/S story. It exploded on me, and I'm posting it to be done with it for now, as it has obsessed me. This is a series of nineteen 100 word drabbles, written in a kind of free verse stream of consciousness. This is also un'beta'd, as I figured the nonsensical grammar would only make a beta miserable. If you see glaring (seemingly unintentional) issues, let me know, I'll fix 'em.
( What He Noticed First )